nouveau chapitre !

Oui, as the title says, nouveau chapitre or instead, new chapter of Dances of the Evanescent.

Chapter XX (20!!!) - The Contradiction.

We are now back to Alice-focused of the story and this time, she has a small, brief conversation with Quess. When I say 'brief' like really brief and quick.
I honestly wanted to put more dialogues but my teacher's words keep telling me inside my mind, 'too many dialogues are bit immature, try to refrain of putting dialogues and...' whatnot, I forgot the last part. :|

And in the last part, I revealed an certain ability for the character Mayu.
I used fonic symbols to capture that fantasy feeling and it directly translates as;

'O' divine maiden, Ceres. Bless me with thy power; petra.'

Petra also means rock in Greek by the way.
So, tell me what you think and until next time my lilies~:)



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